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Our world is dark and people cruel
The skies are filled with endless gray
And trust, it seems to make the fool
Of those who hope for brighter day
When darker ways are here to stay
And we must live through pain and fear
As every hope begins to fray
Yet still I find you waiting here

Our world is thread without a spool
Our work at knowledge only play
And though it seems a murky pool
I no longer need be fazed
For all I need is passion's blaze
My mind is cloud but this is clear
We still all live within this maze
Yet still I find you waiting here

And still I lived within this rule
Of tragic life I cannot say
And then you made a shining jewel
Of care and joy and one that may
Be worthy of your loving gaze
And I smile ear to ear
For I am flaw and you are praise
Yet still I find you waiting here

And so I cannot find a way
To show you all the wondrous cheer
Of debt that I just can't repay
Yet still I find you waiting here
Am Drawponies (drawponies.deviantart.com) boyfriend. He is best boyfriend. So one love poem gets written. One.
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drawponies Jan 21, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I must say, this poem is rather exquisite.

I mean, obviously I'm biased, but I do think it is very well written :D
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:iconhugohackenberger:
As a redditor, I can second this. ;)

EDIT: Where is Snoo in the smiley section?
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drawponies Jan 21, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
A fellow soul who recognizes the exquisiteness that is this poem!

Hai
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:iconhugohackenberger:
Hi.

You did post this on Reddit, didn't You?
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drawponies Jan 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I DID
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